The season of earlier and longer nights.
Can bring happiness to all.
Everywhere there are colorful lights,
that replaces the colors of fallen leaves,
from the previous season of fall.
People outside having fun,
some making snowmen/ snow angels,
others throwing snowballs,
or some just simply running with each other.
Some staying inside, happy being around one another.
Lay/sit by a warm fire in different angles.
Drinking,playing,reading/telling stories, or talking.
Listen to the bells ringing,
as Santa's sleigh comes flying.
Behold the presents under the lit tree.
Look how the kids are happily unwrapping.
T'is the season to be jolly.
This is a good poem to summarize what happens in the winter. Also the picture is good for demonstrating how winter looks like but what does the two moons or planets in the background have to do with this poem. Overall, I think you could have used more figurative descriptions instead of literal descriptions of the winter.
ReplyDeleteThe two moons and planets doesn't have anything to do with my poem. I just like the picture of how it depicts winter. Got to admit it's a cool picture.
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